Every screenwriter wants to create engaging, intriguing, and, most of all, memorable characters. Writers never want to undersell a character with a poor introduction. You might be thinking that in screenwriting, introducing a character is easy! You have to write their name, age, and a brief physical description, and you’re done.
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Writing character descriptions is one of the most overlooked aspects of screenwriting. That’s why today I’m talking all about introducing characters and providing some screenplay character description examples!
What is Character Description in a Screenplay?
A character description is the literal introduction of a character in a screenplay. It’s the first time the reader comes across this character, so it provides brief information about them, their name, age, and a brief physical description.
Why is Character Description Necessary?
Character descriptions are necessary because, without them, a reader might overlook a character or be confused about who they are. Character descriptions say to a reader, “Hey, pay attention! This character is important!”
What Goes Into Character Description?
1. Name and Age
A character description includes writing a character’s name in all caps when they’re first introduced. Writing the name in all caps helps alert the reader to the introduction of a new character. Their age range should accompany the character name in parenthesis, for example, SUSAN (25–30).
2. Physical Descriptions
You don’t have to get overly detailed about what your character is wearing or what they look like. Try to pick out one aspect or write a short sentence that speaks to the visual nature of your character. Do they always wear the same denim jacket with patches for various social causes on it? Are they the lone redhead in their family of blondes? Describe something about your character that brings the visual to life and tells us about who they are.
3. Write a Sentence to Describe Their Traits
In a brief sentence, you want to express a defining description of your character. Being able to nail down who a character is in one sentence takes practice, so don’t sweat it if you struggle at first! Some examples might be:
- She’s the type of person who uses secrets as currency.
- He might not look it, but he’s the strongest person in the room.
- She’s the kind of person you’d feel safe approaching to ask for directions.
Character Description Examples
I could type away all day explaining character descriptions, but like with most things in screenwriting, I think reading examples is more impactful. Here are some examples of character descriptions. Bad examples, good examples, and examples from produced screenplays!
Examples of Bad Character Description
This description is very bare bones. It tells us who the character is but doesn’t provide much information beyond what she’s doing.
Again, this is an example that doesn’t provide much information. It does provide a simple description that you might come across in teen rom-coms or horror movies. That description boils a character down to their attractiveness. Usually, this is seen with female characters where they’re simply described as hot, pretty, or beautiful with no further description. “Hot” doesn’t tell us about a character; there are many different versions of hot. “Hot” also doesn’t relay information about a character’s personality.
Examples of Good Character Description
This description tells us more about Judy than the previous bad example. Judy is in her 30s and is plain enough looking that nobody has ever caught her in her lifelong shoplifting career. This description invites intrigue; it makes us want to know why Judy is a career shoplifter.
This description is a lot more in-depth. Michael is described as looking like an Abercrombie model, and he’s so good-looking that mundane, annoying things like getting hit in the face with a football don’t happen to him. We also know that he’s distracted and looking for someone.
Real Character Description Examples
“The Silence of the Lambs” by Ted Tally
This character description of Dr. Hannibal Lecter paints how unsettling of a character he is while also speaking to his polite, formal, and cultured personality.
“Training Day” by David Ayer
The description of Denzel Washington’s character, Sergeant Alonzo Harris, speaks a lot about who he is and how others perceive him.
“Queen and Slim” by Lena Waithe
This script has very direct character descriptions that quickly summarize each main character.
“10 Thinks I Hate About You” by Karen McCullah & Kirsten Smith
The description of Kat tells us a lot about her.
In Conclusion
Now you’re ready to go off and write your own character descriptions! Remember to consider what your character descriptions say about who your character is. Don’t sell your characters short with character descriptions that don’t tell us something about them, their personality, or their traits. Happy writing!
